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Treasure of the ocean....
Contributed by
mina-1
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Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 07:14:34 AM in AEST
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You're the treasure of the ocean
I, but a grain of sand
Held next to you I'm a speck in
someone's hand
People long to hold you
To view your iridescent glow
A beautiful gem
Found in the ocean down below
You're encased in beauty
You bask on the ocean floors
A shining dazzler when your
shell opens it's door
Embedded in surroundings to
protect your sweet core
Only making people want you
even more
Women love to touch you
Feel you around their necks
Fussing over your radiantly beautiful
shining specks
You're the pearl in the oyster
I, but a grain of sand
Envying your beauty in someone elses hand.
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mina-1
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2005-02-22 07:14:34]
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Re: Treasure of the ocean....
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 08:08:59 AM AEST
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heavenly beautifully written.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Treasure of the ocean....
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by jmpy84 on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 05:22:13 PM AEST
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| beautifully done |
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Re: Treasure of the ocean....
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 01:19:04 AM AEST
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The imagery in this piece is just so beautiful and delicate.
"You're the pearl in the oyster
I, but a grain of sand
Envying your beauty in someone elses hand."
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