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I Dreamed Of You
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 10:34:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I Dreamed Of You
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I dreamed of you
And prayed each night for my dream to come true
In the corners of my mind
Your love was always something I seeked to find
Your beauty shown so bright
It dominated my dreams as I slept at night
Yet when the morning came
My loneliness for you always felt the same
I struggled to make it through
For when the sun shined it was me without you
So I couldn’t wait until the night
Cause in my dreams I could always hold you tight
You were my favorite fantasy
A perfect picture of how a girl should be
But since you can’t be mine
I’ll forever keep you inside my mind
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Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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2005-02-21 22:34:31]
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Re: I Dreamed Of You
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by poky1502 on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 11:12:22 PM AEST
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| dreams are quite powerful .. .well done |
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Re: I Dreamed Of You
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by jmakuer on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 12:43:03 AM AEST
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| well done body..i could relate to the poem....i always dream of a girl to be mine yet i don't seems to win her back to my life..so i just keep dreaming and wishing her to be mine. |
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Re: I Dreamed Of You
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 07:42:19 AM AEST
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Who can't relate? Wonderfully said.
I'd watch tenses in a few places. I think you want sought rather than seeked and shone rather than shined.
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Re: I Dreamed Of You
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by CurtisC on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 05:29:03 PM AEST
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great write...you know sometimes i dream and those dreams sometimes happen, like deja vu, anyway maybe this dream you keep having is a sign of whats to come...hold onto your dreams :)
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