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I've Come Here To Kill
Contributed by
rottenrioter
on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 07:35:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I've come here to kill you
I won't leave until you die
Stab you with a Knife
Mix Rat poison in your coffee
I Want to see you Bleeding there on the floor
You lay Still
I stand watching trying to figure out my next move
I watch you drowning in your own blood
I laugh as you suffer in pain
I take your bloody hand
You said you wish your life would end
I made it happen
I thought you would be happy with your outcome
You wanted to be gone from this wicked world
You wanted away from all the lies
Now you are
I stand beside you trying to find away to dispose of your corpse
One last kiss and into the bag you go
I'm driving on the free way
Ditch you and the Mustang
Get rid of the evidence
Now that youre gone i can move on and find a new love
My Next Kill
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2005-02-21 19:35:36]
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Re: I've Come Here To Kill
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 10:59:02 PM AEST
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| beware future love interests =] excellent poem. never love a cop though... |
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Re: I've Come Here To Kill
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by Rottenrioter on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 09:55:03 PM AEST
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| Im commenting on my own peom but oh well..This is Probably one of the most messed up ones i've witten besides "The One"..I think both have song potential but thats me..Other opinions please |
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Re: I've Come Here To Kill
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by AshRayne on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 03:23:54 PM AEST
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aparently this person doesn't understand love. a twisted poem my friend, loving it.
Exquisite writing that is your gift, be blessed, for you are perfection.
~Ash |
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