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Make Love..Make Love. Make Hate To Me
Contributed by
Deleterious_Dislike
on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 06:31:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Next to you I bleed and I say,
maybe tonight they'll take me away.
Travel me far and take me to him,
the Palace of Spirits, to drown me in Gin.
I am not afraid..
..of what I deserve.
In Hell I belong,
there forever I'll serve.
I'll serve Satan his wines..his fruits..his whores.
I'll wipe clean his shoes I'll open his doors.
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Take it off me
cut me up
lick it off
slit...
...slash
Oops you slipped
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2005-02-21 18:31:13]
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Re: Make Love..Make Love. Make Hate To Me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 07:58:34 PM AEST
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| Wow...First of all, great title. It really caught my attention. Second of all, I loved this piece. Such raw emotion and intense feelings. This is definately one of the best writes I've read in a while. Great work. Keep it up. |
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Re: Make Love..Make Love. Make Hate To Me
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 11:08:27 PM AEST
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| thanks for putting me out of a job. =] i loved this piece. i agree with marisa completely. this was worth reading when so many poems here arent. |
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Re: Make Love..Make Love. Make Hate To Me
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by Scarlett on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 05:08:17 AM AEST
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| brilliant, loved it as always. have missed your poetry! x x |
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