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Jake
Contributed by
little_genna
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Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 04:43:30 PM in AEST
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It has taken years,
I have shed many tears.
Finally I feel it once more,
Yet still I am not sure.
We happened so fast,
Makes me doubt whether we'll last.
When I am with you I don't feel doubt,
I feel like we will never fallout.
When we are apart I wonder will you stay,
With you I feel more than okay.
Saying 'bye' seems so hard for you,
You certainly know it is for me too.
With you I have no shame,
You have helped me become tame.
One day apart,
I miss you so much sweetheart.
The sound of your voice makes me happy,
Yet miss you so deeply.
I want to phone you but not wanting to appear clingy.
Oh, I don't know what to do sadly.
SJ
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Re: Jake
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by jjones12 on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 05:01:05 PM AEST
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great write!
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Re: Jake
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by savedbydeath on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 05:57:29 PM AEST
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awesome write,sounds like u really like this dude,which is cool,how can anyone live never liking someone,but u dont seem clingy just bc u want to call him,it just shows how much u like him and that ur missing him every second u dont see him or hear his voice,good luck,hopen the best for u and ur bf,keep up the great job,loven it
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Re: Jake
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 08:06:18 PM AEST
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i must say this poem is so sad i realy felt it as
i was reading it " not wanting 2 appear clingy"
that realy got 2 me, how sad the state of love nowadays, 2 want 2 love some one and be plauged by terms, such ambiguity, verry beautiful poem your an excellant writter. . .
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Re: Jake
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by Mangs on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 01:04:33 PM AEST
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| part of this magical feeling is not knowing whats gonna happen and the other part is that believing everything will turn out right.....and ur gonna have the best of both...so hun stop worryin and live for the moment.....be the happiest princess u can be...love always... |
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Re: Jake
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by gmcse8 on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 03:33:19 PM AEST
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| not going to comment on this one much, just interested because of the use of the word TAME. saw the same word in another of your poems on basically the same subject, Jake,,,,,,,,,, would like to meet him, has caused you, the wild woman of poetry, rage and anger and angst incarnate, to say tame when talking about your self. What ever he has, needs to bottle it and sell it, Ms. Tame, who would have thunk it. Bravo to Jake, sorry I couldn't resist, bob |
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