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Unlike You
Contributed by
Daniels_Princess
on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 04:32:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You promised youd never hurt me
You promised youd never leave
You promised youd never cheat on me
But little did I see
It now seems to make sense
All the questions that you asked
I should have known from the start
Youre just like every other guy from my past
But I hope you two are happy
And please know that Im not mad
But I do hope you realize
Im the best youll ever have
I hope you know you messed up
Even though I made my mistakes too
But I kept my promises, baby
Unlike you
Copyright ©
Daniels_Princess
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2005-02-21 16:32:32]
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Re: Unlike You
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by hopefulheavyheart on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 04:39:34 PM AEST
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| Nice use of Rhyme and feeling. I'm glad you are positive enough about yourself to realize he is the one missing out! |
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Re: Unlike You
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by Daniels_Princess on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 04:47:53 PM AEST
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| Thank you for the comment, and at first I felt like it was me who messed up, and I did something wrong..like he cheated, and I lost..but hes the one losing. |
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Re: Unlike You
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 10:16:25 PM AEST
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Great poem, really cool how you looked past the negative and saw the positive. Awesome.
Scott |
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