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Philosophy in the Garden
Contributed by
bethie
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Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 04:21:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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We were brilliant under the sparkling,
summer's sun,
on a bright and bold afternoon.
Speaking about all that we had done;
and how it was over too soon..
Studying our lives, while selecting
lillies and lilacs,
Searching for pearls of wisdom
underneath the gardens
rocks.
Copyright ©
bethie
... [
2005-02-21 16:21:19]
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Re: Philosophy in the Garden
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by Stitch on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 05:04:43 PM AEST
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I think you need an apostrophe on gardens, but otherwise this is pure perfection to me.
Loved it.
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Re: Philosophy in the Garden
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 09:18:40 PM AEST
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| Very nicely written. Much peace. |
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Re: Philosophy in the Garden
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 01:25:17 PM AEST
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charmingly romantic... hugs n' love nessa
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