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60
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 02:03:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I counted how long we were apart,
It was 60 long hours that battered my heart,
That is something I never wish to do again,
I barely withstood all the loneliness & pain.
We never spend much time away,
We are together as always day after day,
As the bond we share is so very deep,
It is one that I truly wish to keep.
The nights were the hardest by far,
From this day on I’ll harbour a deep scar,
In my soul I will carry this forever,
The memory & I will stay together.
The memory of the day I nearly lost,
The love of my life at a deadly cost,
There is one promise I will make for you,
It is that I’ll never again turn you blue.
I miss you only after a few minutes have gone by,
My heart & my soul let out a great sigh,
As like me they are so happy that our love,
Has again come together like hand to glove.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-02-21 14:03:05]
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Re: 60
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by Nazmythian on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 02:07:22 PM AEST
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Another thing of beauty Pixie ... you are gonna show these to him ... Right ? You should.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: 60
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 08:13:12 PM AEST
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a verry effective poem nice writting pixie u tell
it well nice style u have . . .
Dorian Chambers
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Re: 60
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 01:25:53 AM AEST
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| Beautiful..its well wrapped. :-)venkat |
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Re: 60
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 09:08:19 AM AEST
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Im so glad everything worked out hunni.
As always you just have proven yourself on how good you really are on writing poems.
Can’t wait to read more of them.
Jane ^_^
(Who’s very happy for Kriss & Mark)
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