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My Bleeding Wrists
Contributed by
cocacola1331
on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 01:10:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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With each problem you bring upon me
I cut into my soul
Compensating the pain
Notch for notch
Problem for problem
Don't you see you're the one
That's really killing me
All this pain that you bring upon me
Its not helping
Its not going to save me
Its too late
You've hurt me too bad
And all that's really left of me
Are my bleeding wrists
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Re: My Bleeding Wrists
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by BEBE on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 01:40:39 PM AEST
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Please dont cut your self... it is not a healthy way t live... I have learned from expeirence... Great write..
GOD BLESS.
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Re: My Bleeding Wrists
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by DamentedSuicide on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 01:57:40 PM AEST
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Scars can always tell a story...wonderful poem
~~~Raven~~~ |
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Re: My Bleeding Wrists
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by Spazzo on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 02:04:31 PM AEST
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Great write. Suicide isn't the answer though.
Scott |
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Re: My Bleeding Wrists
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by waos on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 02:45:28 PM AEST
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I know exactly how you feel. And I know how horrible it is.
Good work hun,
~Waos/Kara |
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Re: My Bleeding Wrists
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by rubytears on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 06:02:02 PM AEST
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i know how that goes cut for cut taking it away yeah i know exactly what it means.....
~*jessica*~
when tears stop coming....... |
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Re: My Bleeding Wrists
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 08:21:23 PM AEST
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Good poem I can relate to this all to well, but I
must say blaming people because YOU cut
yourself isn't cool. People may have hurt you
but in the end it was you that cut yourself and
not them. You need to forgive those people
and love yourself. Cutting isn't the answer to
your problems, but writing is so I am glad that
you chose to write out your feelings. Please
continue to use that outlet.
Bobo (Joel) |
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