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Contributed by
ashleigh4
on
Friday, 13th December 2002 @ 02:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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drawing breath
i slowly slice
and picture death
i close my eyes
breathing out
i feel the pain
escaping doubt
i start again
opening eye
my soul i give
i wish to die
but only live
Copyright ©
ashleigh4
... [
2002-12-13 14:30:00]
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Re: cut
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by juliette on
Friday, 13th December 2002 @ 03:02:13 PM AEST
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Oh, I think it is very well written, sad, but you've captured real, raw emotion. Deep stuff....
*Juliette |
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Re: cut
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 13th December 2002 @ 04:38:39 PM AEST
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| How very sad,I hope its not true! There is hope! Great write! Christina |
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Re: cut
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by humboldtsweetie33 on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 08:39:44 PM AEST
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| wow short but very powerful. excellent poem |
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Re: cut
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by depressedsoul on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 10:16:31 AM AEST
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| NICE I REALLY LIKE IT |
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Re: cut
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by depressedsoul on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 10:17:11 AM AEST
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| NICE I REALLY LIKE IT! :) :) |
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