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Buying Suicide
Contributed by
DamentedSuicide
on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 12:45:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Hit play
Watch as the blade slips
Your buying your daughters suicide
Watch as her death is televised
Stop rewind
Watch the agony in her eyes
pain contorting her beautiful face
blood splattered screen
amused you watch
pause
Look at the note
zoom
read what she has wrote
'I wish you could understand
wish you could know
what its like to have your
suicide televised
and no one cares
Daddy if you are reading this,
why didnt you try and save me?'
play
stop
rewind
eject, your daughters suicide and lay it on the shelf
Copyright ©
DamentedSuicide
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2005-02-21 12:45:11]
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Re: Buying Suicide
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by pixie on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 12:46:27 PM AEST
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that was weird, but very different I really liked it
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Re: Buying Suicide
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by BEBE on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 02:10:11 PM AEST
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Your right... is it suppose to mean, like your in a room that is being taped.. from what i got from it i like it a lo.
GOD BLESS
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Re: Buying Suicide
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by Spazzo on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 02:17:09 PM AEST
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Wow. This is a great poem, and very sad. I hope things get better for you.
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Re: Buying Suicide
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 12:18:55 PM AEST
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so vivid and full of imagery details. liked this very much. Great job..
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Re: Buying Suicide
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 05:35:03 PM AEST
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with so many reality shows eating up the TV these days it probably is only a matter of time before we see some Dick Clark looking, plastic faced wannabee, hosting something like this.
I liked the format you used. I think it is pretty original. Nice.
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