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A Vision
Contributed by
Willofree
on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 12:15:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Skyward there appears to be
Downy clouds,
Pictures to see
Oh, look
Angels flying and roaming about
Wow, Jesus is out
Playing with the children
Smiles
Laughter
And fun
No sadness or pain for anyone
Gold paths
And gilded steeples
A dazzling display to please the senses
Fragrance exquisite,
Music so awesome,
Grandeur abounds
Dark clouds are beginning to form again
What a different environment we are in
Back to reality
Forget the fantasy
A feeling of longing takes over
Wait!
What do you see?
An opening with a shaft of brilliant sunlight
A person, Jesus is gesturing to us
A booming voice speaks
"What I have here in heaven is for everyone
All you need to do is acknowledge my Son
And your place in paradise is won"
We smile
My Lord and Saviour
Copyright ©
Willofree
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2005-02-21 12:15:22]
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Re: A Vision
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by pixie on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 12:20:29 PM AEST
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a nice and gentle read, good poem
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Re: A Vision
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by Nazmythian on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 12:22:50 PM AEST
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A definate step away from the norm Terry. It is always refreshing to see that happen. I recommend you try to do so as offten as possible. I do believe it success. And a beautiful message as well.
Nicely done Terry,
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: A Vision
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by Moonglow on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 12:25:35 PM AEST
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| Ten outa ten, nice read. |
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Re: A Vision
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by Baig on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 12:30:39 PM AEST
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| thought it was clean and simple. nice |
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Re: A Vision
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 05:06:34 AM AEST
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Nice vision, good work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: A Vision
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 03:21:57 PM AEST
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| Nice to have visions. Good write. I like it. |
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