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Dream Star
Contributed by
mina-1
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Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 02:13:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I looked up to my dream star and
Made a wish from far
It touched my heart in many ways
Bringing happiness to light up my days
I knew I could touch it
I knew it knew me well
I knew if I savoured it
Great love stories I'd live to tell
For I've waited for this moment
I guess you already know
To share some of this beautiful love
shining radiantly from your glow
In reality that beauty in the sky is you
Wishing in my heart I could hold you is all that I
can do
For if my wish is answered
If my wish came true
I'd want a special place
Amongst you out in the blue
There we can be together
There we are one
Shining brightly until the morning rises it's sun.
Copyright ©
mina-1
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2005-02-21 02:13:49]
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Re: Dream Star
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 02:20:51 AM AEST
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| Aww...this is lovely. There's so much warmth and sincerity in it. Beautiful. |
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Re: Dream Star
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by Rhymingron on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 06:59:01 AM AEST
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| I like this one. |
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Re: Dream Star
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 07:16:25 AM AEST
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A beautiful poem so thoughful and poetic . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Dream Star
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by Les4567 on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 11:19:16 AM AEST
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It is a very good poem as well... you are good at what you do
Keep up the good work
~Leslie |
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Re: Dream Star
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by jmpy84 on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 12:11:37 AM AEST
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| lovely and warm great job |
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Re: Dream Star
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by emystar on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:19:12 AM AEST
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Another very beautifull write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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