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Gone
Contributed by
Les4567
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Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 11:28:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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It seems like forever sice
I've seen your face
I want so desperately
To feel you
And your sweet embrace
Why did you leave me?
You left with no goodbyes
I remember the night of
November twenty-third
The police officer told me
As I stood on the curb
He said he took his own life
Not another word
Blankly I stared
Into the damp dark night
All i felt was anger and fright
The sign on the corner
Help me up
The tears flowed
From my eyes
In a downpour of disbelief
Thoughts racing through my head
Is this my fault?
Could I have saved my one true love?
The day we met
I swear I'll never forget
Our first kiss
Was pure and total bliss
The day you uttered
"I love you Les"
Will forever be in my dreams
I love you Rob
I still can't believe
That you
My baby are
Gone.
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Les4567
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2005-02-20 23:28:12]
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Re: Gone
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by disturbed_silence on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 12:13:52 AM AEST
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I'm sorry about your loss.I'm sure he was a great guy because of how you speak of him.
great way to express an great poem |
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Re: Gone
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by mina-1 on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 01:13:06 AM AEST
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I'm so sorry for ur loss Leslie.
This is a sad and very emotional write.
You had tears coming from my eyes.
May his soul rest in peace.
love and peace to u Leslie |
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Re: Gone
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 02:49:23 AM AEST
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| I'm so very sorry for your loss. My thoughts are with you. |
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Re: Gone
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by fielding88 on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 08:23:30 PM AEST
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| lovely write i can only imagine how it feels to lose someone, but writing about it must be cathartic. great write |
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Re: Gone
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by Nazmythian on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 01:28:53 PM AEST
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A friend of mine took his life on my daughters 12th birthday ... our relationship was not the same as yours ... but I so understand the confusions and queastions and wondering why he never said anything about what was driving him to such a dark place ... you address them well Leslie.
Nazmythian ~ |
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