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Come back
Contributed by
angelqueen10154
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Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 10:31:42 PM in AEST
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A visit from you could make my day,
It would make me so happy and gay,
You would brighten my heart and make it gold,
I miss you so,
I want to see you again,
You're the best that comes,
I never even knew you,
Why can't you be here,
I want you back,
You died when i was young,
I loved you so much,
I dont even remember your face,
All that is left is a faded photograph,
You never should have left me alone on the world,
You helped me face the facts,
I miss you but yet you are still here.
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Re: Come back
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by Les4567 on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 10:36:22 PM AEST
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good poem and sad
good write
look forward to more of your poems
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Re: Come back
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by heartquake on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 11:49:22 PM AEST
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| great poem, both my grandmothers died when i was young so I can relate |
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Re: Come back
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by mindset on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 02:57:46 PM AEST
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| one off moment i think yet you will have your day |
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