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Mirror
Contributed by
Yuri
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Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 05:25:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I look in the mirror
and what do I see?
The tears of a lonely girl in me
I look to the left
I look to the right
I feel that I have no might
I look to the north
I look to the south
I open my mouth
But the words won't come out
Then I finally look to the sky
My eyes start to water
and I start to cry.
Copyright ©
Yuri
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2005-02-20 17:25:18]
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Re: Mirror
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by allforyou on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 05:36:43 PM AEST
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So sad.....
--Kara |
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Re: Mirror
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 05:42:37 PM AEST
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A really expressive and sad write. =( I wish you the best...
(I like the way you set this up as well, there's
a nice flow to it, and a sense of originality
in a very commonly written about subject. Good job.) |
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Re: Mirror
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by GrantedLovable on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 10:26:37 PM AEST
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| Short and sad. |
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