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Running Out Of Time
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 03:13:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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The world is running out of time
To repent and make peace
Soon the hatered and evil
Will tear us apart
And distroy the world
We are staining this gift of earth
With the blood of others
We are killing our brothers
And our children are killing themselves
They know that it is better to not live in such a world
Soon we will be beyond forgiveness
And the homes and places we worked so hard to protect and create
Will be distroyed
And the earth will be distroyed by the carelessness of man
As we kill each other
And as we cause others to kill themselves
We never stop to think
About what we are doing
And the conciquences it will have
Time is running out
And yet we are still to blind
To see
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DesolantDreamer
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2005-02-20 15:13:21]
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Re: Running Out Of Time
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 03:34:52 PM AEST
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Nicely done, true, thought provoking and expressive, I like it. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Running Out Of Time
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by weepingprophet on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 08:30:36 PM AEST
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your concept was that of intrigue, your words were greatly lacking.often times what is said good in ten words is said brilliantly in two. choose carefully and indecisively, always question for perfect but do not fear the failure, it is inevitable.
~we're screaming silently, unconsciencously, begging and cursing the world around us. the agony of the hatred is when we open our eyes we're looking in a mirror.~weepingprophet
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