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lost inside
Contributed by
karmen
on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 01:41:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Shes all over the place,
confused on what to do.
Shes afraid, just look at her face,
and you will see.
Shes lost in her mind,
with her dreams fading away.
The right path she can't find.
Shes slipping from life.
Her emotion she will hide,
and her faith is no longer real.
She has no more pride,
to go on like this.
She use to be so full of grace,
now in life,
she is losing her place.
Shes lost inside.
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karmen
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2005-02-20 13:41:11]
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Re: lost inside
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by dreamer_for_eternity on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 02:24:36 PM AEST
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| kinda reminds me of the avril lavigne song "Nobody's Home" but that's just me... good write |
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Re: lost inside
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by hellsfallenangel on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 01:53:45 PM AEST
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i like it comment on some more of mine ok bye
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