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I Watched & I Waited
Contributed by
pixie
on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 10:11:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I watched from my window,
I waited as my pain did grow,
I hoped & prayed for you to come,
I wanted my hurt to turn into numb.
Every car that drove on by,
I realised it wasn’t you & it made me cry,
My love had gone vanished from my world,
I’ve been to wilt into a sad & lonely girl.
I had lost you; you were never to return,
I stand alone to feel the burn,
The unmistakeable burn of heartache,
I started to die & I started to break.
You were my one true love, my everything,
You took me under your soft, soft wing,
But I hurt you like no other ever had,
I made everything turn all sour & bad.
Now when I hold out my hand you’re not there,
So into the loneliness I do stare,
Death would be such a walk in the park,
As I would find peace alone in the dark.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-02-20 10:11:01]
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Re: I Watched & I Waited
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by Arsenic on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 12:24:21 PM AEST
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| Very nice. Why does a song come to mind? "I listen for your footsteps..." Such emotion there. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: I Watched & I Waited
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 12:34:18 PM AEST
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Another testiment 2 your beautifuly gracious
writting pix, as always this one touches the
heart in so many ways, wish u well in your
quest 4 love my friend . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: I Watched & I Waited
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by Mangs on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 01:20:41 PM AEST
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| If i had a penny for everytime i felt like this.......very touchy... |
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Re: I Watched & I Waited
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by O7NeVeS on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 04:08:04 PM AEST
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| Very emotional, heartfelt write...I wish u luck! TD |
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Re: I Watched & I Waited
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by vibes2go on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 04:21:58 PM AEST
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great as usual pixilator..heart touching..
mary..
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