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Alone
Contributed by
Yuri
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Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 05:50:43 AM in AEST
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My laughter's dead
My smile has gone
It's been 5 months
and it feels so long
I can't take much more
my soul has finished
the joy I had
has now diminished
no more please, God
I've had all I can take
How much torture can you make?
I feel so alone
no one in this world
I finally feel
that there is no Lord
where is he now
what good does he bring
what does he want,
our "fair" king?
How much does he love you
how much does he care
where is he now?
It's just not fair.
Copyright ©
Yuri
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2005-02-20 05:50:43]
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Re: Alone
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by Tobe on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 06:11:48 AM AEST
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Hey, nice write, full of feeling and emotion. I too feel like this sometimes and I wrote a poem of the same nature a while back. Is this the first poem you've ever written? Go have a suss of my poems and let us know what you think of them.
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Re: Alone
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 05:08:42 PM AEST
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| I'vew often felt like this and many poems have come out of it. This is a great piece you have here. Keep it up. I look forward to reading more from you. |
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Re: Alone
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by Yuri on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 05:12:22 PM AEST
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| Thanks, it is my first poem. |
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Re: Alone
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by Les4567 on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 10:41:10 PM AEST
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It's a very good poem i cant wait to read more of your poems
~Leslie |
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