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Into the Den II (Old Echo, New Friend)
Contributed by
Xnoybis
on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 04:38:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Hard case maniac
Show me your stance
Cross the cues with me
And let's set to dance
Show me your tats
On cue, when I ask
Flex to defeat me
And fill up your mask
Puff up your front
And we'll have some fun
You've hatred for something
But I'm not the one
I'll meet your meaning
And show you I know
I'm not your enemy
Outcast Cholo
Respect of markings
Old School Dog Town
Hoist up your drink
And together we'll drown
Respect of Others
Respect of Brothers
Respect is one thing
That nothing can smother.
Copyright ©
Xnoybis
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2005-02-20 04:38:45]
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Re: Into the Den II (Old Echo, New Friend)
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by freckle on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 10:26:18 AM AEST
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| Again, I liked the write. There were a few spots where I got a little confused. You're good at expressing the feelings in your work. I enjoyed it. Thanks again and keep posting! |
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Re: Into the Den II (Old Echo, New Friend)
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by B-Rut on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 10:10:13 PM AEST
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| I really like the rhyming and rhythm of this poem. The theme of this poem was interesting and fun to read. I especially like the way you ended. Thanks for the poem! |
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