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do you ever
Contributed by
jmakuer
on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 02:37:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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do you ever think about me
do you ever dream about me
do you ever ask about me
have you ever felt this
i can't believe i am acting
like this love is crazy
it's crazy baby
how i still can feel your kiss how
i still can feel your lips against mine
how i still think of you every night
do you ever think about me
do you ever dream about me
do you ever ask about me
it's been so long, and i can't
even feel like i was so wrong
since the day you went away
do you ever think about me
do you ever dream about me
do you ever ask about me
Copyright ©2004 JOHN MAKUER
Copyright ©
jmakuer
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2005-02-20 02:37:30]
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Re: do you ever
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 04:07:39 AM AEST
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Hmm another good poem.
do you ever think about me
do you ever dream about me
do you ever ask about me
I liked this lines the best, it says so much. |
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Re: do you ever
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by Arsenic on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 12:35:28 PM AEST
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| I like this one! Very good. I'm not crazy about the "have you ever felt..." stanza probably because of the shift in tone with the "it's crazy baby". Just came accross as less true then the rest of the poem. Good work as always. |
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