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Silenced
Contributed by
Les4567
on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 11:14:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I extend my arm
For you to grab
You have no acknowledgment of my existence
I plumet through the darkness
Screaming all the way
Why didnt you take my hand?
I sense cold hard ground
I see nothing
I feel nothing
I am nothing
I am gone
I have been silenced
Silenced by the ground below me
I take a hard blow to the head
You have silenced me
If only you had the heart
To grab me when you had the chance
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Les4567
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2005-02-19 23:14:50]
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Re: Silenced
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 12:09:35 AM AEST
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and in the nothing comes freedom.
nice write.
thanks for sharing |
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Re: Silenced
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 10:40:29 PM AEST
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| this is shorter than your others and isnt as good in my opinion. i just dont like too much repeating of the same words, that is all. never stop writing. |
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Re: Silenced
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 10:44:54 PM AEST
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| Sad write. I liked it though. Great work. |
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Re: Silenced
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 10:27:56 AM AEST
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Ouch. I felt this one right through. You have captured the feeling of abandonment with finesse.
Stitch |
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Re: Silenced
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by Broken_Inside on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 12:53:40 AM AEST
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Wow
great poem
I can relate to that alot
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