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Old Friends
Contributed by
lilsprtygrl21
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Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 08:57:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Old Friends
I remember when you came over,
We had a lot of fun.
Bike rides, late nights, and enjoying outside in the sun.
Now it seems we've lost in touch,
I hope I can see you again sometime.
I remember when we used to go fishing,
And I had to untangle your fishing line.
What's that? Is that the phone I hear?
Ringing quite faint, but yet, so clear.
"Hello?", I said, surprised to hear, that
my long lost friend is finally here!
I'm here in the park, where she said she would be.
We'll have a picnic and talk about old times.
From the tree house we made,
to the childish nursery rhymes.
As we say our good byes from a great afternoon,
I said, "I hope I'll see you soon".
She said the same, as she went on her way.
I went back home to enjoy the rest of the day.
Well, if I don't see you again,
I wish you could know how much I miss you.
Even when we had little fights, you were a great friend,
and I will remember you 'till the very end.
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Re: Old Friends
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by Gunda on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 09:07:09 PM AEST
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Isn`t it stange how we can meet old friends and realace how much we have missed them... I really engoyed your poem, it is a good write....
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Re: Old Friends
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 08:46:07 PM AEST
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Friendships are a form of love.
When you make a good friend hang on to himor her.Friendships are to be charished. Good write.
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