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She's So Sad
Contributed by
AliB
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Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 06:45:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Struggling with feelings she doesn’t understand
Frustration rules a colourless life
Dreams shattered, a pitiful existence
Void of all hope, desperate and alone
No-one to love her, to protect her from harm
A longing for excitement, a lust for life
Beaten out of her long ago
Bruises and scars, to see and to feel
Freedom is lost, fear is to stay
Betrayed once too often, trust never her friend
Ghosts of the past, haunting every waking moment
Torturing and tormenting her heart and her soul
Anger boils over, recaptures memories lost
Reliving a time when she had the strength to fight back
But now silence surrounds her
Echoing the beat of her heart
Weak and defeated
She gives up
She’s so sad
Copyright ©
AliB
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2005-02-19 18:45:17]
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Re: She's So Sad
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 06:49:37 PM AEST
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This is beautiful. Its written perfectly, flows smoothly and is just... touching in a way. nicely done.
Take Care
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Re: She's So Sad
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by MLCstar on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 07:07:59 PM AEST
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| this poem is pretty good. I don't agree that it is written perfectly, it does not flow as smoothly as it could. and the topic is not that original. but over all not bad. |
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Re: She's So Sad
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by pixie on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 10:37:50 AM AEST
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wow that was so powerfully written, great emotional write
pix xx |
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Re: She's So Sad
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by LaDyD on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 10:39:26 PM AEST
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| Great write I enjoyed it..=) |
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Re: She's So Sad
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 01:49:23 PM AEST
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that's an excellent write Ali and aptly titled it's a shame she gave up.
Johnny. |
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