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With new eyes...
Contributed by
PoetBaby814
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Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 06:08:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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With new eyes I see myself
who in time dissapeared
With new eyes I placed my old away
while I look away for something more
With new eyes I see my place
where I don't belong, so I try to find
my own way
With new eyes
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2005-02-19 18:08:25]
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Re: With new eyes...
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 06:41:12 PM AEST
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This is nice. Welcome to YPDC by the way.
Scott |
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Re: With new eyes...
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by MLCstar on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 06:54:21 PM AEST
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| Ahhhhhhh, a new beginning, how wonderful. You wrote it so simply and powerfully. I hope you recieved a good grade. I identify with the fantastic feelings of chosing a new, better direction in life. Well done. I hope you enjoy YPDC as much as I have. |
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Re: With new eyes...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 07:05:49 PM AEST
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Short, sweet and to the point. I love it. I hope you find what you're looking for, with your new eyes. :o)
Take Care
- Becca |
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