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I'm sorry...
Contributed by
PoetBaby814
on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 06:00:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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Excuses were made, words were spoken
I hold on, feelings broken
Feeling bad, is hard to show
Being mad, is easier though
Words mean nothing
Silence goes nowhere
Time will pass
Will we last?
Its not up to me, I've got your back
A friend is what I'll always be
I'll wait for you at the end of the track
I hope this race ends fast
My heart will hurt until it does
But I will wait just because...
Copyright ©
PoetBaby814
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2005-02-19 18:00:21]
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Re: I'm sorry...
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 06:19:50 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful apology. I hope your friend forgives you. This is very heartfelt.
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Re: I'm sorry...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 07:09:38 PM AEST
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Its beautiful, i'm surey our friend will love it. I hope things are okay between you now. Nicely done, it flows smoothly and is written to perfection. :o)
Take Care
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