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Smile, Broken Man
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 05:34:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Smiles
Like burning fires
What I need it to get through the cold
And the dark times when I've lost hold
Laughs
Like chains that trap
What I need to fix a broken heart
And stop me from falling apart
Hugs
Like addicting drugs
What I need to get my fix
And undo all previous tricks
You
Everything I need to keep from being blue
Someone that helps me stand
And does'nt care how much I cry and fall
Because she'll catch me
Before I land
With just a touch
...
Of her hand
...
A Fallen Angel
Stoping the sands
Of time
For her broken man
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
... [
2005-02-19 17:34:02]
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Re: Smile, Broken Man
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by MLCstar on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 07:13:06 PM AEST
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| Creatively dark. I enjoyed how you structured your poem with the emphasised first word all alone. Impressive technique. |
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Re: Smile, Broken Man
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 09:07:38 PM AEST
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| not broken, just bent beyond repair. fantastico. yo me gusta el poema. this reminded me of trapt, except their thing was hollow man. |
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Re: Smile, Broken Man
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 09:32:10 PM AEST
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very beautiful peice of essensial writting . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Smile, Broken Man
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 09:29:11 AM AEST
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| wonderful... |
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Re: Smile, Broken Man
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by heartbroken4ever on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 06:12:50 PM AEST
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one word Beautiful
Love you
Amber |
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