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I thought wrong
Contributed by
BEBE
on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 01:46:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I thought I knew her
But I was wrong.
I have been betrayed.
Now is when we begin to fade.
She's been fake
For God's sake.
I begin to feel heartache.
I thought she was happy
But all this tyme she's just been crappy.
Don't you think, as a friend that I should know
Wheather my best friend is High or low?
I thought we were close.
But I suppose
That I thought wrong.
To feel for a friend I thought I had
is really sad, it makes me mad.
She can keep on being fake. I will become fake
And we can just live happily ever after (being fake)
Copyright ©
BEBE
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2005-02-19 01:46:18] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I thought wrong
(User Rating: 1 ) by SunRaise on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 02:17:27 AM AEST (User
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I think your writing is very good and u should keep up the good work!!
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Re: I thought wrong
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sinned on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 04:49:19 AM AEST (User
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Bebe
Be yourself and accept your friend as she is--with all of her faults.Don't judge just be there.
Back your first poem I read, Why !
Isn't this another WHY ?
Keep writing you are good.
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Re: I thought wrong
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spazzo on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 02:14:30 PM AEST (User
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Nice poem.
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Re: I thought wrong
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rhymingron on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 05:33:35 PM AEST (User
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Good write. |
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