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Winter Dressed
Contributed by
poorgirl
on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 11:25:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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The black bones reach
curve and bear to the wind
Stretches out
Each limb a thousand fingers
Hungrily reaching to the sky
That cold heavy, laden gray mat
That fills from horizon
to the ends of place
Chilled to the winter scourge
The Icy hands that grip fast and hold
Everything to the bleak empty scene.
She cries her fearsome shudder
that fills every parched cold blade
that faded brown holds its silence
In this outer grave of decay.
She sweeps down each hill
in the sequence of night
rigid her appearance,
Like a widow wailing her long lost love
She tosses the world around her
Grudging all, any similarities of life
Cold, Staunch, this whisper of death
that sings forever December's song
Winter dressed.
Copyright ©
poorgirl
... [
2005-02-18 23:25:55]
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Re: Winter Dressed
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by Rhymingron on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 11:32:12 PM AEST
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| This is really good. Reading it makes me shiver it is so real. Your imagery is fantastic. |
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Re: Winter Dressed
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 11:43:26 PM AEST
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| Bravo,very nice write! |
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Re: Winter Dressed
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by n2dep2care on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 02:49:10 PM AEST
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Vivid, haunting images. Beautiful and melancholic. Love the title. Nice Job!
Laurie |
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Re: Winter Dressed
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 10:14:18 PM AEST
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Thats shiver freindly
i like it alot.
--> rae |
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