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Death by Emotional Homicide
Contributed by
CrystalTIgerBloodrose
on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 10:38:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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How bittersweet these battlefields are:
Littered with corpses near and far.
Broken swords and bleeding hearts,
Young ones forever torn apart...
We've lost so many skirmishes today;
Tomorrow more will fade away.
And yet our eternal nemesis,
Never beaten while stealing our bliss,
Takes us all to our graves.
In this war, no one is saved.
And always our immortal enemy wins:
With each victory, the evil one grins.
Every child born dies in this war.
But we keep fighting for something more.
We continue to lose, and we always will
Because we're fighting against what we can't kill.
Copyright ©
CrystalTIgerBloodrose
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2005-02-18 22:38:37]
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Re: Death by Emotional Homicide
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by Rhymingron on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 11:22:11 PM AEST
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| I wish I could say, "I see, " but I can't. Never-the-less it is a really good poem. |
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Re: Death by Emotional Homicide
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by BEBE on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 02:07:36 AM AEST
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I dont really understand but hey... it was good for what i got out of it..... keep up the good work
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Re: Death by Emotional Homicide
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by n2dep2care on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 03:07:14 PM AEST
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Excellently written, but would have been more enjoyable if you had left me to my own interpretation of your work. Never lead where I can’t follow. Nice job on this write.
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