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Get to them
Contributed by
breakaway2feel
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Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 09:57:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If I took my life away what exactly would I solve
I'd only be given in to what they want; for them to watch me fall
If I stood on the other side could I seek revenge
I'd probably burn in hell for this; my choices wearing thin
If I lived and took a stand I'd only be brought down
I'd never get this off my back; My freedom is far from found
If I could just get to them could this madness stop
I'd wish to only ease my pain; to live instead of rot
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Re: Get to them
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 10:01:59 PM AEST
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| Great write. I really liked the flow. |
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Re: Get to them
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 01:19:36 AM AEST
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| Agree with Marisa this had a great rhythm great flow to it. Good write. Much peace. |
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