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Eyes Wide Black!
Contributed by
Unaekseveer1
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Saturday, 20th July 2002 @ 11:04:25 PM in AEST
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His eyes they are
As black as coal
They pierce into
Your very soul
His stare is such
That we don’t see
All we’ve done
Is set him free
He made his home
Behind those bars
For robbing stores
And stealing cars
Then one day
In sixty-seven
He booked his place
In altar heaven
Those girls and Tex
Took lives for him
The scenes they left
So very grim
To start a war
Tween black and white
This is his goal
His plan, his sight
His word he gives
For what it’s worth
To return one day
And rule this Earth
For if he does
We all must prey
There’s no one left
This darkest day
My Lord I trust
You’ll overcome
The evil in this child
Charles Manson.
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Unaekseveer1
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Re: Eyes Wide Black!
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by Sherry_Gail_Heim on
Sunday, 21st July 2002 @ 09:13:54 AM AEST
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I knew who you were referring to as soon as you mentioned the eyes. He still creeps me out. I used to hike right there at the ranch where he was staying with his brood. After all the news was released, I said a silent prayer that I was not somehow caught up in the crossfire.
Very intense write. Gave me goosebumps, even here in the warm desert where I now live.
Take care,
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Re: Eyes Wide Black!
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by cryingonmyporch on
Sunday, 21st July 2002 @ 02:22:38 PM AEST
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| I really liked your poetry its strong. |
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Re: Eyes Wide Black!
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Saturday, 3rd August 2002 @ 11:29:26 PM AEST
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Hi Sherry, Praying seems all we can do to prevent such terrible things occurring ever again
With love
Dean |
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Re: Eyes Wide Black!
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Saturday, 3rd August 2002 @ 11:32:30 PM AEST
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Hi cryingonmyporch, It seems to be getting more and more difficult to write like this!
I am pleased you liked
With love
Dean |
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Re: Eyes Wide Black!
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by ShadowsCloud on
Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 09:12:38 AM AEST
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Dean, I also knew whom you were talking about before you said the name. This is a very good poem. Well writen. I like it.
ShadowsCloud |
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Re: Eyes Wide Black!
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 09:34:56 AM AEST
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Thankyou Candice,
This is the first poem I wrote that wasn't about or for my lost love!
I am pleased you like it, as rarely for one of my own, I do too!
He is a worrying little man indeed!
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Eyes Wide Black!
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by ShadowsCloud on
Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 09:51:35 AM AEST
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Dean, indeed he is. I swear there seems to always be something about him a tv even now. I only know this because my grandma seems to always be watching something about him. She watches some of the weirdest things.
ShadowsCloud |
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