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When She Crumbles, You Wont Be Able To Glue Her Back Together
Contributed by
ElevenToedSloth
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Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 09:20:54 PM in AEST
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I just wish I had a friend
that I could call, and
sob to through my tears
but I havent even got that anymore.
I wish that I had a mother
who'd listen to my plees
and get worried when
I cant even eat.
I wish I had a lover
who could kiss a smile on my face
in the worst of times.
I wish I had someone to sit here
and listen to a million of my petty complaints
and throw me a bit of tacky false hope
every once in awhile
I wish I had somebody
who cared enough to call
who wouldnt except "I'm fine" as an answer
to "how are you?"
and who would question me
when I destoyed my own body.
I wish I had a boy
who would write songs about me
and listen to my songs
and not bother to critacize,
just smile and tell me he loves me.
I wish I had somebody
who would notice, not ignore
the signs of my self destruction.
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ElevenToedSloth
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2005-02-18 21:20:54]
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Re: When She Crumbles, You Wont Be Able To Glue Her Back Together
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by ElevenToedSloth on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 09:32:24 PM AEST
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I wrote this in an odd state, when I wasnt really keeping track of spelling errors/
So, here you go.
Pleas*
Destroyed*
Critisize*
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Re: When She Crumbles, You Wont Be Able To Glue Her Back Together
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 12:34:32 AM AEST
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| Full of mix emotions! Great Write !! |
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