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Inside Gloom
Contributed by
alister
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Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 05:04:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Everyday is egalitarian whether it be dark,
Frost bitten, shadowed spurious night
Or bright with trees reflecting like mirrors,
Never portraying anything of importance,
Only a barren landscape of ideals.
Unfold every finger in attempt to grasp more after every failure.
With a face that ages through the years,
Inside, withered like old railroad tracks hidden under a canopy of weeds.
They are forgotten…
I want to be contagious. Replace my heart with flesh.
Burn my anxiety so no trembling remains.
Inside, a paroxysm is brewing, yes all is relative
But outstretched arms are all too familiar.
There is no moratorium here so leave the lamentations.
Shrewdness is obscured by self-indulgence.
Words are in vain like a sword against a poltergeist.
Copyright ©
alister
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2005-02-18 17:04:02]
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Re: Inside Gloom
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by allforyou on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 05:11:04 PM AEST
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awesome
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Re: Inside Gloom
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 05:25:29 PM AEST
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| its been a while since ive seen something this good. |
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Re: Inside Gloom
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by redtears on
Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 09:14:05 PM AEST
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| my goodness! you are good! |
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Re: Inside Gloom
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by flamingblade on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 02:59:25 PM AEST
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nice use of long words
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