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NO MORE
Contributed by
sweetoccasion29
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Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 02:31:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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life with you has become too much
i hold the blame,guilt and shame
the marks of anger dont you agree
this is crazy?
we should both bow out gracefully,
end this now cease the pain
im sorry im leaving ive had enough!
walking out leaving you,the anger
no more whats wrong?What did i do?iI didnt
mean it that way,i love you
the smiles,laughs all but faded replaced with pain
then tears there after
amazing even now im ate with guilt
my blood flows sadness,
flipping through my mind gathering answers,oh yeah
thats the reasons
drowning emeralds now cloudly with tears
lend me your shirttail let me dry them please
these are the last,you remember,put them away with your memories
Copyright ©
sweetoccasion29
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2005-02-18 14:31:53]
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Re: NO MORE
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 05:49:04 PM AEST
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And resentment is like drinking poison?
I like that analogy.
Keep writing. |
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Re: NO MORE
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by Sinned on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 09:16:11 PM AEST
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drounding eneralds now cloudy with tears.
I love this line.
Another tremendrous poem by you. :)
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