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The world is at its end.
Contributed by
iodinelove
on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 04:43:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The world is at its end.
A simple sentence
pauses
breaks down unfolds
A buffalo blows bubbles on the side line
completing the intimacy of a ruptured spleen
A ruptured spleen emerges
cries out cries blood and bone and marrow
The world is at its side
screaming forever in an empty jar
screaming I hate
in a cardboard plastic bag
bagging the carrots and peas
the subliminal magazine
lying on my sleeve
The night is at its end.
A simple sentence
pauses
breaks down encloses
A store encrusted above one starry head
complicates this single embedded gem of emotion
An emotion struggling to contain
a simple defeated act, a pious deniable decision
denying the hole and holes in his side
screaming forever in crowded parking lot panoramic views
screaming I hate
in concrete paper houses
housing the people and the street
the insurmountable delusion
dying on my sleeve
The world is at its end.
A simple sentence
pauses
breaks down imposes
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iodinelove
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2005-02-18 04:43:39]
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Re: The world is at its end.
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by Stitch on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 07:28:48 AM AEST
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You have a fascinating way with words. I hope to get to read more of your stuff soon.
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Re: The world is at its end.
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by Sinned on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 10:01:40 AM AEST
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Iodinelove
I have read many of your poems and think you are a really good writer,but I have re-read this several times and I confess I don't quite understand the meaning--am I that dence or what ?
Sorry.
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