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Glorified hopes
Contributed by
clowns_can_burn
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Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 12:53:07 AM in AEST
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Walking down the empty street
Staring into the stars
A memory once shared
Has only brought tears upon thy eyes
Stop
Lie down and just stare
Stare into the obscurity of your life
Take just one moment
To see the light that isn’t there
Holding on to everything that couldn’t be reached
That figment of my imagination apprehended me
Those special moments cease to exist
Taken for granted
Something that can never be returned
Glorified hopes shot down
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clowns_can_burn
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2005-02-18 00:53:07]
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Re: Glorified hopes
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 01:12:12 AM AEST
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this is true art in it's purest form. You got the wording and the flow weaved together so well, this is like nothing I've ever read before! YOu should be proud of such a work of art.
BTW, I like your name |
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Re: Glorified hopes
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by Taurusgem1 on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 01:14:43 AM AEST
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| Very nice. I love what you say with this. |
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