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The Ink Blot
Contributed by
b_rand
on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 11:40:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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when my pen hits the paper the world disappears
my power and potence vanish my fears
and i feel my emotions bottled for years
shake and earthquake and erupt into tears
watch the ink blur as they fall and destroy
and leave behind nothing but stains and a void
where i once wrote of pain and excitement and joy
and now im contained as this lighthearted boy
when id like to be something more godly inside
the most powerful optimist ever to rise
omniscient, efficient, infinitely wise
this is the dream my pen leaves behind
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b_rand
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2005-02-17 23:40:05]
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Re: The Ink Blot
(User Rating: 1 )
by Coaster on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 11:42:56 PM AEST
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wow, thats really good. really felt the words instead of read them. Look foward to reading more of your stuff and keep writing
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Re: The Ink Blot
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by Rhymingron on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 12:05:30 AM AEST
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| I really liked this one. I look forward to reading more. |
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