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A Fake
Contributed by
sheigha
on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The person before you
Is not really me
For I have died long, long ago
I'm now just a shadow
Of me in the past
The real me is no longer known
I haven't been happy
My energy's spent
It all goes to cover my pain
You might see me smile
But it's just a fake
Relieving your worries again
You ask how I am
I'll always say fine
But really I'm hurting inside
And you'll never know
For it stays in me
Locked as in a vault defying time
And it only gets fuller
As time goes on
Never shrinking a bit
For pain never stops
never ceases to hurt
And sadly we all must endure it
Copyright ©
sheigha
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2002-12-12 23:40:00]
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Re: A Fake
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by lilch4ever on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 11:55:22 PM AEST
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| good. |
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Re: A Fake
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by Snugglebear on
Friday, 13th December 2002 @ 12:25:52 AM AEST
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| You wrote a great poem.Let me just say i know for a fact that i have felt like that a number of times. Its great to know ur not alone out there. I'm sure there are other ppl who feel like they have to constantly hide in order to stay happy. I just wanted you to knwo ur not alone....i'm there with ya! lol! Great poem...keep it go'n... |
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Re: A Fake
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 13th December 2002 @ 12:03:24 PM AEST
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Dear Sheigha @-<-<<-
An Excellent write !
Hope your Christmas
is Merrier and Happy!
Always Nessa
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Re: A Fake
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by orgygirl on
Friday, 13th December 2002 @ 10:28:37 PM AEST
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| Very true. |
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Re: A Fake
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by nightrider on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 07:41:14 PM AEST
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| way, way too true |
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