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Death Becomes Me
Contributed by
rottenrioter
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Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 09:09:11 PM in AEST
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Dead to you and everything we knew
I'm taking the firebird for one last ride
To help get rid of all the pain you caused
Needle through the skin
Yeah that shoud do it
Get rid of all the pain from everything that's turned its back on me
Good bye
You see me in the Casket
You wish you could say you're sorry
But I'm sorry it's a little late for that
Death becomes me
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2005-02-17 21:09:11]
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Re: Death Becomes Me
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 09:19:29 PM AEST
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| awesome and sooo dark..i like it alot |
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Re: Death Becomes Me
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by Petznick on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 10:48:41 PM AEST
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is it bad if i say that i always wonder how people would react if i died right now? this captures the images so well, really good one
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Re: Death Becomes Me
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 12:39:54 AM AEST
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| needs something more. hrm, i dont know exactly what either. too short for me i guess =] |
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