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Haven't
Contributed by
disturbed_silence
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Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 06:25:40 PM in AEST
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two souls
a fantasy in her mind
eyes haven't met yet
yet souls have talk
life is full of surprises
you'll never know
that's why she daydreams
to make him real
yet....she knows he's real
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2005-02-17 18:25:40]
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Re: Haven't
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by garyh on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 06:29:19 PM AEST
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| Interesting poem. The two 'yet's in a row sound a little weird though |
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Re: Haven't
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by Stonedraider23 on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 06:49:07 PM AEST
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| good writte but i dont think its finished |
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Re: Haven't
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 04:55:16 PM AEST
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great poem with a little more push it could of been brilliant
but i can see where your coming from
love han xx |
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