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The Gun
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
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Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 06:25:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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As I grab the gun
And set It on the shelf
I start to wonder and think
About me and my future self
I gaze at the handle
And it's trigger
Knowing it can handle
All of my problems
That are getting bigger
My life is a cesspool
And a group of lies
Knowing this gun is my tool
Thats going to rid you all
Of my worthless life
I grab the gun
Feeling nobody will never understand
Why my life is over run
They'll never understand why I ran
As I start to taste the metal
And looking through the scope from the wrong side
I notice my life is closest to a roses fallen petals
The wind gets rid of it when it can no longer hold on
They would rather just be swept away and die
My life ends
Tasteing a bullet
And pool of red blood
Did'nt know I could actually go through with it
Guess I really could
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2005-02-17 18:25:36]
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Re: The Gun
(User Rating: 1 )
by garyh on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 06:33:10 PM AEST
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| Powerful poem. Shows light on how it feels to be in that situation. |
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Re: The Gun
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by xXcrossedXx on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 07:25:39 PM AEST
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| Great job clark. I agree, very powerful. You can get through it, please don't resort to that.. you and all theseYPDC members have been so great to me it kept me from cutting again the other day, you can't leave me now. |
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Re: The Gun
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by TheEarlyNovember on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 10:04:42 PM AEST
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| I usually detest suicide poetry since every other poem is a long drug out self pity bit. But this one is different and I really like it. Your a good writer and know when not to go in so deep to the point of being pathetic. It's simple and too the point. Good write. |
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Re: The Gun
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 12:44:27 AM AEST
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| its nice to know there are some here still left that can still pull off an amazing ending. |
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