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Murder (he) Wrote Part One
Contributed by
ElevenToedSloth
on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 05:48:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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If I could die anyway,
By choice-
I'd have you strangle me,
with the necklace you've left
wrapped around my neck.
If possible, I'd go by your hand today.
It offers closure.
And,
That's what we're lacking, sweety.
The satisfaction found only in closure.
What's stopping you?
Is it fear?
Dont be afraid.
You've got nothing to fear.
A faulty suicide note,
and I promise I'll muffle my screams.
Copyright ©
ElevenToedSloth
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2005-02-17 17:48:26]
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Re: Murder (he) Wrote Part One
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 05:55:04 PM AEST
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nice...i like the end...
'I promise I'll muffle my screams.'
okays on form, a few good lines, overall good job...
Auryn
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Re: Murder (he) Wrote Part One
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 10:03:29 PM AEST
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i love it...dark poetry is the best...and this one is definitely amazing.
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