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Engulfed
Contributed by
freckle
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Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 05:09:58 PM in AEST
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Engulfed
In the whirlwind
of my mind
Confusion blowing
Round and round
wild thoughts running
Unravelling
Begins slowly
mazes start to straighten
Against whipping phrases
I hold fast to solid thoughts
loosening slightly
Grasping
Nimble word patterns
fight to survive
Windtunnel forms quickly
Carried along thoughts
are lost in a jumble
Drowning
I try to pull them
so near to me
Awkwardly I tell them
Ferverent promises made
yes - we make sense.
Carol L.Chadwick
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freckle
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2005-02-17 17:09:58]
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Re: Engulfed
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 05:28:45 PM AEST
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About writing? That's what makes sense to me. I can relate. I had a problem with your caps though. Was there a rhyme or reason to them that I missed?
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Re: Engulfed
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by freckle on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 06:25:30 PM AEST
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| No reason for the caps. I honestly didn't even look at them, I just pasted it from a disk that I made from my other computer. (Didn't sleep much last night...can I blame it on that? : ) |
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Re: Engulfed
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 09:44:27 PM AEST
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An intriguing piece on the mind... its complexity and the irrational tendencies in which we sometimes offer ourselves.
Thought provoking muse. |
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Re: Engulfed
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 03:30:54 AM AEST
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| Truly an amazing piece of poetry!!! |
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Re: Engulfed
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by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 03:16:41 PM AEST
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| breathtaking |
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