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You took everything from me, Yet I have never met you
Contributed by
imhearingvoices
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Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 04:37:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You had him in his prime,
you took everything of mine,
First love,
First kiss,
His tears as he'd miss,
Your love,
Your face,
Your lips,
The kiss.
He longs for you as he still does now,
your his every care your name everywhere,
Your rose in his room velvet dark red,
The blood from my arm,
The pain you both fed.
You both know that Im weak
My arm, my thigh, my eyes still leak..
From the start second best,
I know from the letters, her txts.
Ive heard to much to forgive and forget,
I know that in your head,
her face,
her love,
the things you both said.
They will never disapear,
Vanish
Or be gone,
This pain the same till Im taken from
My life,
Her name,
Till Im put to rest
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Re: You took everything from me, Yet I have never met you
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by shelby on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 05:35:30 PM AEST
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very intent powerful write I get several meanings from this very well done
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Re: You took everything from me, Yet I have never met you
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 06:15:38 PM AEST
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A good exploration of a fascinating topic.
Nice stuff.
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Re: You took everything from me, Yet I have never met you
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by loveisendless on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 02:49:57 AM AEST
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NICE POEM! ALOT OF FEELINGS PUT INTO IT!!IT'S LIKE A VOICE NEVER TO VANISH!!!
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