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I lie in the meadow
Contributed by
NeonHusky
on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 04:01:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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i lie in the meadow
among grass and tree,
nearby i hear a stream flow,
so beautifully.
perfect clouds float by and by,
i smell the flowers and feel the wind.
the clouds clear and show the sky
the sun feels warm on my skin.
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2005-02-17 16:01:18] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I lie in the meadow
(User Rating: 1 ) by fielding88 on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 05:31:18 PM AEST (User
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understandably incomplete. there's just so much subject matter to address here, but so far so good. i like what i've read so far, and incomplete or not you've got my attention. nice write |
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