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Your Blind
Contributed by
sean88
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Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 02:01:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Your blind to the world
Your blind to me,
You can still look
But you just don’t see,
You shut it all off
And close your eyes,
You dare not peek
And get a surprise,
You choose what to see
And then what to think,
Hate it or like it
You must not blink,
So keep them open
Don’t just glance,
My promise to you
Your view will enhance
Copyright ©
sean88
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2005-02-17 14:01:50]
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Re: Your Blind
(User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 07:04:58 PM AEST
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a lovely and wise peice of writting . . .
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Re: Your Blind
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by treasure on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 11:54:11 AM AEST
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| i really like this. it's got a nice little flow goin' and the mssg is good. great write. |
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