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A Poets Excuse
Contributed by
bethie
on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 10:31:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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If I could pervade this page with prose,
that would make me so content;
A lovely, love poem I would compose;
or inscribe a sad lament.
If every line were perfect verse,
and all my thoughts conveyed;
I would write more wise words;
an important perception relay.
But I'm feeling a bit frustrated,
and a trifle inept;
So perhaps tomorrow a new poem
created;
If this one you refuse to accept.
Copyright ©
bethie
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2005-02-17 10:31:48] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A Poets Excuse
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 09:59:24 PM AEST (User
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i cant believe no one else has commented on this. i loved it. your word use and rhyme were specific things i noticed. keep writing. |
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Re: A Poets Excuse
(User Rating: 1 ) by CodyJ on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 05:44:11 PM AEST (User
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good piece. much peace to you. kudos |
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Re: A Poets Excuse
(User Rating: 1 ) by bearwon on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 09:52:33 AM AEST (User
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great use of words. loved it!!! |
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