|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Blotch
Contributed by
sicknivesevered
on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 10:28:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
|
Allow me to be frank
Allow me to spill the *****
Allow me to be honest
Go ahead and bite your lip
Cause this bridge is bursting, breaking
And there's pyromancy nigh
Your old revolves around you
And ***** colors your eyes
I'm touched by your transactions
And idiosyncrasies
Wincing to perfection
Who the ***** needs to say "please"?
To be selfish, I'm a bastard
And my morals are shred dead
I clutch to the corner
My emotions slaughtered red
I shift in the silence
And I focus on one thought:
"***** this feeling
To you I'm just a blotch"
Allow me to be open
Allow me a loose tongue
Allow whats left inside of this
To be spoken and not hung
Cause I'm sick of your dead banter
And neo-nazi *****
I'm sick of your dim puppets
Waiting to be lit
Wasting on the papers
Spewing futilely to my face
The match is burning, blazing
In due time you'll be erased
It can't help your case
That my tomb is sealed shut
That part of me has died
It suffocated in the rut
I stare past your voice
And focus on one thought:
"***** your teachings
To your god I'm just a blotch"
Allow me to be truthful
Allow me the last word
Allow me to strive
And don't tell me its absurd
Cause even though you're stable
And though you're not alone
Have trust that I'm able
And you're just another clone
You beat me over the hill
I'm sure you're proud of that
I'm sure you're proud of being a tool
And expanding beyond fat
I hope you ***** know
How pathetic you ***** are
You're a ***** broken record
That skips all its scars
And as I die in your utopia
I focus on one thought:
"***** me trying
To the world I'm just a blotch"
Copyright ©
sicknivesevered
... [
2005-02-17 10:28:59]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Blotch
(User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 09:01:15 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I love it. Very creative. I love the beginning and the structure. Terrific write, very moving.
--amanda-- |
|
|
Re: Blotch
(User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 5th April 2007 @ 10:10:09 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Amazing. Another spit in you face and shove down your throat write. This was really good.
Take care
Christina |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
